i thought you were a willow tree

for all i did was weep.

then the leaves that had me

turned to teeth.

and i caught myself in a rose tree.

the vines had thorns that tore my skin

i dreamed of love since i was a kid.

you took that love

and ate it up

just like a venus fly trap would.


  • sylviasearcher

    I like you use of imagery from nature, especially the weeping willow, made me feel forlorn.

  • lainacarson98

    thank you. im really in touch with nature.

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