In a club drinking shots
Out of candy cups .
He stops, we talk, I walk, he follows.
Fast forward
In the back of his truck
On the way to be killed?
Screaming, filled with panic
Whole body has gone static
Fuck this guy is manic.
Emersesed in his charm
Never did I think I would come to this sort of harm
Blood pouring down my neck
I never did suspect
He would have some crazy ass need
To watch me bleed.
"Stop please let me go"
"Be quiet bitch Or I am going to fuck you in the nearest ditch"
Another blow to the head
"Bitch your going to wish you were dead"
Fast forward
Its cold, its wet
His heart it's so black
His eyes have depths of hate
I feel the weight of his body against mine
I whine as he enters me.
He covers my mouth I can no longer scream
I've come to my final end it would seem.
Fast foward
Morning,
Found lying naked on the ground
Hands bound
Unable to make a sound.
Fast forward
Still here in the land of the living
Yet reliving that night over and over, my ultimate downfall
It seems he killed me after all.
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Author:
Angela1711 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is mich darker than anything I have written before. Let me know what you think.
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I typically write dark poetry and this really grabbed me. Great piece of writing!
Thank you. I thought I'd move a little out of my comfort zone.I usually write about my own personal experiences x
Well you did really well! Very impressed! X
Wow, this is a very descriptive dark write. It 's good to go out of our comfort zone sometimes and you did it really well. I too, usually write dark poetry but have been going out of my way to write things about love and other soppy stuff! But poems like this are much more grabbing and scarily inviting. Great write liked the format also!
Thank you. My imagination did run a bit wild on this one. I can only really seem to write when im in one of those darker deep thought moods. Lol Love and soppy stuff also read well. I really enjoyed your recent poem. X
Haha, I think we can all scare ourselves sometimes! Aww thank you that's very kind I just saw your lovely comments! I have a stark contrast one coming tomorrow which is slightly darker and funnily enough I wrote it just after reading this poem, so maybe you illuminated my darkness a little! x
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