Fine Young Disciples
When you
Have had
Your fill
Sweetheart
And he his
I do wonder
Who shall
Discard who
Yes I do still
Wonder
Every
Now and then
Will it end
In tears
I imagine
That it might
Maybe even
Always will
That tho is
The risk
You take
Longevity or
Brief liaison
Talk about
Love
You dream
About it
But no it’s
Not for you
Fixated as
You are on
Fairy tales
And stardust
The time
Has come
To choose
My love
Choose now
Or risk
Loosing
Each and every
One of us
Fine young
Disciples
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments4
Well that's life isn't it and aptly described by you. The risk we all take when getting involved with someone and the repercussions that partnership can have on the others in our lives.
I suspect an aura of concern surrounds the said relationship to prompt this writing.
Words for the recipient of such a piece to dwell upon.
Cheers DA..... the inspiration for this rant is long forgot.....N
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as disciples we learn about love as we discover its faces in risks taken. A deep and engaging read.
thank you Fay.. N
There are some social norms that humans have placed on themselves, either knowing or should have known are doomed to fail. One of these is coupling of two people for life.
Similarly, expecting two people to love each other for life.
Your ending lines, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF US FINE YOUNG DECIPLES has thrown me off for it implies multiple people.
Maybe I'm just reading it wrong,
Relationships are hard.
not to worry, I'm just glad you read it right the way to the end... cheers N
A fine write N.
thank you O...... N
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