She looked for love on back street alleys,
where no roses grow, she found the glow,
of a full dumpster, inundated with knotted tears,
and partially written letters, to the man she once loved....
@ClaudelleHenet2019
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Claudelle DeLuna (
Offline) - Published: May 6th, 2019 11:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Just another poem..... Thank you for visiting reading &/or commenting. Happy Monday! Blessings, **Claudelle** 💖
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So atmospheric the music backing sad words - a lament indeed when back streets are searched for love.
HOLA CLAUDELLE ~ GRACIAS por Musica y Poema muy muy tristes. In my eyes all ladies are beautiful & very precious. It seems so incongruous that some have to *Search for LOVE in back street alleys ~ where no roses grow !* I (BRIAN) have partially written (Love) Letters to one I loved (in the past) and never posted them ! So I can empathise with the closing words of your SAD & LONELY POEM !
Abrazos y Besos para Tu
Tus Amigos Verdades ~ BRIAN y ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
brief but packing a powerful and poignant punch
Such an emotive write once again Claudelle.
Good write Claudelle.
Knotted tears are so hard to fall. I like this one
Much appreciated
..."with knotted tears" - fantastic line!
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