Treasure Hunting
05/05/2019
Treasure - precious words floating out there
Hunting - to search that we know to exist
Words written by thousands
Now relegated to times past
Speaks of persons mindset
When penned at long last
I like to search at random
Ensuring, it not a chore
Lays out the mood unfolding
Over time, when scored
Many a memories are jarred
By comments on time forgotten
We sigh with a smile, feeling
Elated or downright rotten
Either way, past is now past
Piling up a mountain high
Always intending to revisit
Years, decades, my, time flies
Many a words I may tweak
In light of new perceptions
But that will be misguided
Innocence lost by corrections
Lets jar each other's memories
Revisit words laced with emotions
New flurry of comments back n forth
Reward new life to times forgotten
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Author:
Suresh (
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Comments7
So many thoughts after reading this!
Always appreciated!
Maybe not this early in the morning 😉
The moving hand doth write
And having writ moves on
Nor all thy piety nor wit
Can move it back to cancel half a line
Nor all thy tears wash out
A WORD OF IT ~ AMEN !
Congratualations Suresh on getting POLE POSITION Today. Poetry is immortal and lives for ever in the printed word ! There are millions of Poems : Worldwide in hundreds of Languages ! We should take care when we pen a Poem. It could influence (for good or ill) a Reader 100's of years ahead !
Ours today is about CHOCOLATE a sweet subject !
BLESSINGS and PEACE and LOVE
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
what a way to spend time... treasure hunting is gonna be the next big thing....... Neville
Words of truth in every line. Follow those words of truth and become content. A super write my friend Thankyou
Coincidentally my latest is a look back in time.
Just the way we write about our experience can bring a romance of past for our reader.
And yours today conjours up deep thought.
A meaningful read Suresh -- I like the notion of hunting for treasured expressions of memories.
There is a certain romance in revisiting, after all.
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