Find your rhythm

Poetic Dan

Guilt and fears can hang around your neck
Couldn't even hit them with a rhythm stick

 

There is just one thing we can always do
Face & let go, putting them back in tune! 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 7th, 2019 02:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: Short and sweet, thought I'd share some of my waiting poems. Life is still a struggle but I think I'm finally above it all, knowing there is so much to be thankful for!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm.
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  • Neville

    if you mean what I think you mean, this is more than just short and sweet, this is something big in just a few small words....... Neville

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend, my brain can be so silly some times.
      Really, really appreciate the help!

      Always with much peace, love and respect!

    • Fay Slimm.

      Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.

      • Poetic Dan

        A true honour my friend to know I'm in your faves.
        I hope you have a splendid day!

      • orchidee

        A fine write Dan.

      • Suresh

        You have a purpose now, so give it your devotion
        Life has a reason, let her fill you with emotions

        • Poetic Dan

          That was fantastic! Like rhyming waterfalls every time
          Have a tea-rrific day!

        • dusk arising

          Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance to that rhythm Dan but i fell over LOL

          • Poetic Dan

            Ha ha best just keep to the one, two step my friend! Or maybe you need to start break dancing

            Always appreciated



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