Fire-Crest
Dance naked for me Fire-crest
Decapitate the rose
Then tell me of your love for sailors
And remember
This last half gram of opium
Can only be
A token of my love for you
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: May 8th, 2019 04:17
- Comment from author about the poem: somewhat begrudgingly marked as mature.....
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You only marked it 18+ cos of fear of Fido's bark?! He won't bite ya though, but he barks terrible. He saw 'naked'. That started him off. heehee. You met any dogs that can read?!
Much more of this and we'll all go potty! lol.
thank you orchidee... I think times & values have changed so much... N
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me....... abuse leads to behaviour where lust replaces true love and girls as described get drug-hooked ........ your forceful verse Nev, though disturbing outlines the treatment young unfortunates receive who see no other way out.
thank you Fay for checking in.............. my last post for a while as have a plane to catch .... Neville
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
and I invariably welcome and appreciate you visiting my friend..... I shall be taking a short break from today and have a plane to catch shortly. Neville
Bring back some tales.
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read through the light of a flickering flame.
Love the way your stuff romances the mind..... always there is mystery.
will do my best...
Raw True and so well phrased Thank you
I thank you my friend and true ... Neville
Intriguing indeed
Brilliantly done, your are on fire lately and leave just absorbing your words with not much to say.
Thanks for being
Perfectly you
Much peace and respect
Hope your flight went well
Bless you Dan my friend, please accept my apologies for the seemingly delayed response... I have been away and forgot my password so got locked out...... Neville
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