I remember looking at the moon
Silver-blanched on balmy nights in June
I always stretched my hands to her in wonder
So still she seemed amid claps of summer thunder
As a child I imagined the queen moon
Milky stars adorned her raiment in monsoon
A silver nimbus graced her white gold curls
Her neck arrayed with luminous roseate pearls
I imagined the fair queen in quiet blue hours
Radiant beneath moonstone alabaster bowers
Bearing a scepter fashioned from a moonlit disk
A wind-borne gift wrapped in whipped cream whisk
I longed to see her palace on moon sands
Admire its spires with crescent plated bands
Or touch the petals of the lotus flowers
Or watch her elfin dance in golden hours
As a child I dreamed I was a sister elf
Who could saddle the moon’s chariot myself
And watch the path unfold like condensed milk
As I sat on plush cushions of the finest silk
I longed to someday catch a moonbeam
And keep it safe inside my chest of dreams
Suffused with light and wonderworking powers
Deep inside the fair moon’s candied cotton towers
- Author: Jo March (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 17th, 2019 14:17
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments3
Great dreams Jo
LOvely expressive piece
Thanks
Thank you so much, Andrew!
HI JO ~ Thanks for focussing on SISTER MOON ! For US the MOON is always an inspiration Scientifically and in Fantasy ! We all fantacise that it is the abode of a LUNAR QUEEN ~ Who controls the TIDES and our EMOTIONS ! We all dream of visiting the MOON and seeing her close up & personal ! BUZZ ALDRIN (1969) called it ~ compared with the vibrant Planet Earth ~ the MAGNIFICENT DESOLATION ! Perhaps he landed in the WRONG PLACE ? What we must all appreciate is the UNIQUENESS (in the SOLAR SYSTEM) of our amazing Natural Sattelite ! NO other PLANET has a MOON ~ so BIG ~ so CLOSE & so BEAUTIFUL ~ Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
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Hello Brian and Angela,
Thank you so much for responding to my poem. I always appreciate your comments. Yes, I agree, the moon always represents something magical, mystical, almost surreal for us. And yes, we are blessed to have our moon -- so close to us and so beautiful. I will definitely check out the Site & Fusion on METALS.
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