is like trying to tread freezing water
as you watch an iceberg of loss
slowly fall from a beautiful
summer sky that you
will never see
ever again.
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Pain can sink you.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments3
That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
Thanks for your comment.
Jon,
A powerful, succinct, and vivid write expressing a painful experience!
~Laura~
Thank you.
You’re welcome!
Without shoes on Jon?
WOW
Great write I feel it
Thanks!
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