Never gone, they've all been dormant
Rotten limbs from the far past
Something has called the forsaken...
Dear Lord,
How long we'll last?
Hoping our time hasn't come
"Stand your ground!"
Frightened i shout
For the grim dawn... brought them forward
As we witness The Black Crown
Hope's a dying figure...
In my knees i feel the dread,
Now i hear the eagles
Such a pity to be scared...
Lovely creatures march ahead
End's beginning aftermath
Now, the ground has been awoken.
Not a sword, or any angel
Can save from my domination
I bring death!
such a true glory...
Now, you cannot even worry.
At a glance over my shoulder,
Or a firm look straight ahead
I now know that we'll be taken
By the likes of the undead...
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Author:
Anymo (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It means nothing me, this is my first ever poem, if you could call it that, i was bored and got nothing else to do, then someone told to me to post it here, i still don't know why. I have no ideea, enjoy it or enjoy your laugh, either way i'm good :)
- Category: Short story
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WELCOME ANYMO ~ Thanks for your First poem ~ well presented in terms of Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject ZOMBIES (UNDEAD !) is also well presanted ! Introduced in Verse 1 Scared in V 2. The presence in V 3. Apity to be scared ? V 4. Death of Glory in V 5. and in V 6. The inevitability of the UNDEAD ! Thanks for scaring ! This is a good Poem ~ sorry you didnt get more comments. Plea reaad & comment on OTHER MEMBERS Poems ~ and they will comment on yours ~ OK !
Your Friend in Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN !
The first 3 verses present and show us what's going on from the perspective of the humans that are being attacked by the zombies, in the 4th and 5th is present the evil entity known as the black crown by the humans, wich happens to be the one the leading the undead and in the 6th we can see that humans are now faithless, they know that nothing can be done anymore and their demise is now inevitable. Also thanks for the nice words 🙂
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