dls2012

Make a long story short

My poems aren’t written

with colorful words

That paint abstract stories

with lines that are blurred

My words are intended

to make abstract real

For my abstract unconscious

to clearly reveal

True feelings felt best

through rhythm and rhyme

Rhymes that hold reasons

beyond space and time

Feelings that thousands

of words might contort

But through rhyme and rhythm

make a long story short

 

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  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Welcome DLS ~ thanks for your first POEM ! Very well written and replete with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ! WE (we are an engaged couple) look forward to your next one ! MPS opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poems and replying to comments ! Please check our SITE ~ OK

    Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡

    • dls2012

      Thank you! I will check out your site!

    • dusk arising

      Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write daily, others (like me) write when the inspiration happens.
      This site works best when we comment upon each others pieces and i welcome you to comment upon mine.

      Your first piece shows straight away you are no clumsy novice in poetic art. An excellent introduction to your ability and intent.... of course I for one will be waiting to see more... please.

      • dls2012

        Thank you so much for your kind words.
        I only write when I’m inspired as well. I can’t force anything really. I’m a very go with the flow personality. INFP if you’re familiar with Myers Briggs.
        I will check out your poetry!



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