My poems aren’t written
with colorful words
That paint abstract stories
with lines that are blurred
My words are intended
to make abstract real
For my abstract unconscious
to clearly reveal
True feelings felt best
through rhythm and rhyme
Rhymes that hold reasons
beyond space and time
Feelings that thousands
of words might contort
But through rhyme and rhythm
make a long story short
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Welcome DLS ~ thanks for your first POEM ! Very well written and replete with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ! WE (we are an engaged couple) look forward to your next one ! MPS opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poems and replying to comments ! Please check our SITE ~ OK
Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
Thank you! I will check out your site!
Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write daily, others (like me) write when the inspiration happens.
This site works best when we comment upon each others pieces and i welcome you to comment upon mine.
Your first piece shows straight away you are no clumsy novice in poetic art. An excellent introduction to your ability and intent.... of course I for one will be waiting to see more... please.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
I only write when I’m inspired as well. I can’t force anything really. I’m a very go with the flow personality. INFP if you’re familiar with Myers Briggs.
I will check out your poetry!
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