Lust and desire
can be quite the brew
Then passion turns to love
for those select few
Adrenaline courses thorough
my hot wanton body
As you decide where
and how you'll touch me
I am a prisoner of
your love and desire
Just waiting to get
scorched by your fire
You compliment my beauty
Yet is this a ruse?
No matter, you have my
attention. You're my muse
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
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Very nice.. just what a guy needs before breakfast....
So happy this write made you happy Neville! Breakfast? Well, it's midnight, but you could email me some eggs and sausage!
you should be in bed.... it's 06.43 here
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You have well used the right words, lust and desire, and neither have anything to do with love, a most misused word, if any.
Light the fire of lust, and explode with desire.
Well, I do appreciate your reply Suresh! Thank you for your honesty.
Well, I was in bed asleep! I missed all this! heehee. I tried to light my fire, but it was a damp squib. Doh! I can't win. lol
You are too funny orchi!! Thanks for the comment. Christina
HOLA CHRISTINA : ANGELA AQUI ! Gracias por esta Poem d'Amor Fuerte ! WOWWWWWWW ! Im glad you made it clear in V 1. that it was about the True Love you share with *J* and not just about LUST which is transient ! V 2. reflects the LOVE I feel about BRIAN when we are together ! V 3. Love this verse : We *Ladies in Love* do become PRISONERS of our Lovers ! V 4. Line one is true because True Love reflects its own kind of BEAUTY between us - AMEN !
Thanks for really elegant LOVE POEM : It makes Me happy to also be *A Lady in Love !*
Blessings & Peace & Love to YOU & YOURS
Love in the SPIRIT : ANGELA
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Appreciate your kind review, Angela!! Will check your poem. Love Christina
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