Away!

sylviasearcher



 

Still I contemplate
The silence
Of my chest
Aching I tolerate
The darkness
Repressed

Soft I sway

Day
To
Night
Today

Away!

Dead I liberate
The drumming
In my bones
Sinking I fascinate
This feeling
Alone

Restless I pray
Night
To
Day
Today

Away!

Floating I emancipate
The horrors
Of my seeing
Rotten I evaporate
Endless
Unbeing

Neverhere I lay
Night
Tonight
End
In
Sight

Away!

  • Author: sylviasearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2019 03:05
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • Suresh

    In differing forms, differing contemplation. A mesmerizing poem

    • sylviasearcher

      Well I am truly humbled at your mesmerisation.

      Thank you 😌

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

      Wow elegant musing in awesome word choice, poetic and soulful, I can see why it mesmerises. Kudos.

      Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?

    • Neville

      I found myself having to read these words through slower than I initially wanted to... because my tongue kind of ripped over itself.... not sure whether I explained that very well.. it is certainly not a criticism .. I found that when I took more time, they flowed better in my head.... which probably says more about my head than anything else... maybe..... Neville

      • sylviasearcher

        Well as I read it I wonder if a few more line breaks would have helped?

        Like

        Still
        I contemplate
        The silence
        Of my chest
        Aching
        I tolerate
        The darkness
        Repressed

        And so on

        • Neville

          that feels so much better... and looks nicer too ...

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