Still I contemplate
The silence
Of my chest
Aching I tolerate
The darkness
Repressed
Soft I sway
Day
To
Night
Today
Away!
Dead I liberate
The drumming
In my bones
Sinking I fascinate
This feeling
Alone
Restless I pray
Night
To
Day
Today
Away!
Floating I emancipate
The horrors
Of my seeing
Rotten I evaporate
Endless
Unbeing
Neverhere I lay
Night
Tonight
End
In
Sight
Away!
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Comments3
In differing forms, differing contemplation. A mesmerizing poem
Well I am truly humbled at your mesmerisation.
Thank you 😌
Wow elegant musing in awesome word choice, poetic and soulful, I can see why it mesmerises. Kudos.
Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too?
Thanks, I’ll take a look
I found myself having to read these words through slower than I initially wanted to... because my tongue kind of ripped over itself.... not sure whether I explained that very well.. it is certainly not a criticism .. I found that when I took more time, they flowed better in my head.... which probably says more about my head than anything else... maybe..... Neville
Well as I read it I wonder if a few more line breaks would have helped?
Like
Still
I contemplate
The silence
Of my chest
Aching
I tolerate
The darkness
Repressed
And so on
that feels so much better... and looks nicer too ...
Yes but you know this website has issues when you try and add spaces after the event!
issues..... wot issues... 🙂
Maybe they are just my issues. Lol
Story of my life!
talk me through it... I have a good ear..... Lol...
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