Santita

Noctis

At home with
the serape of night
aching sorrow
becomes 
soul-soothing light
Bewitching
raven hours 
rouse my inner
celestial flowers
to paint the sky
with gold moondust
& cosmic rosebuds
Dimming the pain
with a silky glaze
warm milky ways
fill these hollows
From this
midnight pallet
I am reborn
as vibrant as
the sun
gleaming 
in the morn'

Comments13

  • Diamond

    That's how waking up to the inner Universe feels like....

    • Santita

      what a beautiful comment, I love that!

    • orchidee

      A fine write Santita. I'm at home with aching sorrow day and night. Well, not really, as I hardly ever see KP. She's always busy being in the newspapers or on telly. lol.

      • Santita

        hahaha but her home is with you!
        Thanks, Orchi!

      • Fay Slimm

        Ah - - penned to perfection this has to be one of your best Santita - I must add it to my favourites to read again.

        • Santita

          You honor me with such a comment! I am elated that you enjoyed it, Fay! All my gratitude.

        • Neville

          Beautifully crafted my dear friend and poet...... Neville

          • Santita

            Thank you so much, my dear friend. I am smiling at your visit! Much appreciated

            • Neville

              I am smiling too and you are much more than welcome.... N

            • Christina8

              Astounding poetic brilliance!! This is incredible!! So beautifully penned my dear friend....Christina

              • Santita

                What an incredibly kind and lovely comment to receive, thank you so much, dearest! Much appreciated

              • dusk arising

                The night, the majestic night, displaying her vastness lands upon our humility as a humbling measure.

                What matter our human worries and tribulation? We are but a speck of creation in this wonderverse.

                Celestial flowers duly blossom and yay Santita is refreshed stepping through a halo of rebirth, fully equipped to face all that comes her way.

                • Santita

                  I always look forward to your thoughts on a piece - 'halo of rebirth' might you be a poet, sir? We must appreciate the vastness of it all, me thinks. :) Thank you, dear.

                • PoeticBiscuit

                  Every time you post I brave myself for a wild trip into some beautiful my written poetry. Job well done Santita.

                  • Santita

                    haha thanks for joining me on the trips! Thanks for this lovely comment, much appreciated :)

                  • Goldfinch60

                    That sun will always shine on you Santita.

                    • Santita

                      and on you, my friend. thank you for the visit :)

                    • Michael Edwards

                      I read this and now I'm floating on a cloud - come join me.

                      • Santita

                        haha I'll be right there! Thanks for your visit, Michael :)

                      • James Michael

                        Very well written and uplifting. Iโ€™m more in the mood for some Unsub though.

                        • Santita

                          yeah, I am too. Hope he pops-up with some stirring words soon.

                        • sylviasearcher

                          Is it just me or is there something oh so very sensual about this? It felt so soothing beneath the wonder of the world. I felt relinquishment, acceptance, anticipation, release and glory. You are an amazing poet.

                          • Santita

                            I love that you could sense some sensual undertones in this! Your words always bring me comfort at times I need them most. Thanks for being a spark of warmth on my page

                            YOU are an amazing poet

                            • sylviasearcher

                              Oh I think you are so much more amazing. You could publish a book of poetry. They are wonderful ๐Ÿ˜Š

                            • Andrew Charles Forrest

                              Beautiful
                              Like from a caterpillar to a butterfly
                              BRAVO!

                              • Santita

                                Thank you so much!

                              • ANGELA & BRIAN

                                Muchos Gracias SANTITA por esta Poema ! Es muy elegante ! In Structure - Sensuousness & Substance ! We have chosen it as a favourite - because when we are apart (11,500 miles) we cannot cuddle our BLUES away - BUT - as you describe - la Noche y Nuestra Hermana Luna - calms our Nerves - lifts our Spirits & sooths our Heartaches ! Amamos esta Poema !

                                Muchos Abrazos y Besos por Tu
                                Tus Hermanos ANGELA y BRIAN
                                ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก



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