Prioritize me, I long to feel needed
used me for all your feedings
now you're fleeting,
I'm so defeated.
I feel like the trees in the winter, no leaves just the soul
vulnerable.
The tears I've cried
The smiles that had lied
The things I cannot see
The feelings that used to be
I'm on my knees, pleading to a higher me, over and above the sea.
My thoughts are mangled
He needs reassurance
He needs love
He needs peace
When did I become so needy?
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Author:
Pauly (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 2nd, 2019 00:17
- Comment from author about the poem: At a time where I had felt lost, even with the person I had loved the most.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments1
Yes this is a needy poem. Why should anybody need someone who is just needy? That's like expecting someone to want a burden?
What is there within you which makes you worth needing?
Well there's your writing for one isn't there.... but there's gotta be more..... looking forward to hearing about it young man.
Welcome to MPS with your strong first offering. Keep writing.
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