We are the many, they are the few. I won't use what I was taught but I'll show you what I feel!
From that past love still sitting in my eye, this pathway to trust was never going to die
With this final decision I sit at my mountain top, never have or will I drop. We stopped in low showing how far it goes, we've played at the highs seeing endless skys
Now my foundations are firmly built, this family of mine is worth ever second of it. No longer do I look for validation to be me, I know I'm among the many making reality a dream.
Some will deny, others will feel that twinkle in their eye.
forgetting whats be sold
Play with life as it unfolds
Fire ignites our soul
Trust connects us all
Wash away the fear with tears
This is our moment to be all that is
Leaderless moving with no ideas
Fearless, entering all doors that appear
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is one thing I can't wait to do again for the 3rd time, when we see who we are in the purest of eyes! This was going to be a writting about that but I went with the flow and that was that! Always appreciate your time, now go and shine ;)
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You may have something here sir.... foundations are the key.. build em strong.................... N
It has been done, theses last few years have been putting the last blocks at the top of my pyramid..... O I like that, cheers for starting another one of lol
Always appreciated
always a pleasure...
Yes, foundation
Word!
I've got so many 😉
One of your very best Dan and so so positive - loved the whole read.
As I do your comments, always appreciate knowing I'm shining as much as I feel.
Must be easy to see with a wonderful soul like yours my dear.
My favorite line would have to be “ I no longer look for validation to be me..” I think the world would be a better place if we all had that mind set.
Must be why we all enjoy it here so much!
Although Bruce Lee said art is nothing but a free expression of the soul.. I'm not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here to live up to mine.
I've always liked to risk it for my biscuit and make up a little rhyme, you never know who you get to meet.
Always appreciated
Wonderful vid Dan... your kids are great .... a pair of rising stars.
Your words ring so true m8. Stop looking at yourself now... you are great.... how do i know? because i read you and i see the great love shared between you and your kids.
Tried to stop you being inward looking when i asked you to write about other stuff... why? .. cos you've done enough inward stuff, you've got 95% of the answers and now it's time to say (and yes i see you saying it already) fk the past, my future is beautiful.... Go get it Dan..... and take us with you in those vids please
Really enjoyed watching and reading.... and commenting too.
Opps I missed the reply lol see below 😉
Thank you my friend, for the reminder to let go of that weight. Thank you for being on this journey with me.
Much peace and respect
In the lost & found
I'm keeping it 😉
Well, I tell folk - the only thing they gotta be afraid of, is if I say 'I'm gonna sing!' heehee.
It wasn't me knocking on your doors, Dan I promise. However, I have caught your reflection from this wonderful poem about turning into a man/women as the poem leads into believing everything will be okay again, just don't go falling off that mountain just yet...!!!
No falling here my friend! My wings are always there, but I've now learnt not to bother in the stormy weather. Just watch and wait for the sun to return!
Always appreciated
Perfect..!!!
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