A Poet with no Poetry -- Don't joke around silly!
It is so nice to catch that outrage coming out involuntarily.
Be proud of your suit though!
There is always a place for new blood to plough.
thump thump!
ba boom!
ba bump!
lub-dub!
dhakdhak!
tu tump!
I am excitedly-scared!
O, dear me! the critique actually cared.
Side note:
Aug. 08, 2019, Thursday
I made this for my Creative Writing Class, which, supposedly should contain
these following Types of Figure of Speech:
Irony
Litotes
Metonymy
Onomatopeia
Oxymoron
Paradox
Homework 1
Please feel free to correct me.
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Author:
V. G (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 8th, 2019 10:28
- Comment from author about the poem: Practically, I am actually talking to my self. Please do bare with me, I am trying my best to be a better somebody. In the last two lines, I declared, that I am, the author, talking to my self about people criticizing me or looking down on me, but some people actually know my capabilities, and they want me to be a better version of me.
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Comments4
Well, I dunno what some of those things are even - litotes for one.
I'm no 'professional' poet, nor Poet Laureate. Nor are many of us on here! lol.
Maybe write more simple style - rhyming or not. 🙂
you know... I really love rhyming. lol
VG welcome to MPS... here just be you, say what you feel and be read by others who hopefully will comment upon your stuff.. Its a great place to grow and see how others grow... to develop your own style... to mature if you like.
This site works best if we all comment upon each others stuff... feel free to rip into my stuff at will (my latest is a bit controversial so i dunno if you ought to start there)
I love the critics, and I don't mind being lectured at because I know that I am still so new in making a poem. And Thank you so much
Note well noted, now let it rip
Look forward to see the rest of your journey
Much peace and respect
Thank you Sir. ♥
Welcome to the site V.G, looking forward to more of your work after this one. Keep them coming!
Thank you so much, I will do my best. ♥
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