Frustrated Love

V

Once Upon a time is never a dime.

Inside the Garden of Eden,

there's always evil, unbeaten.

 

Oh, Dear God! guide me through this insanity of mine!

for the love of oneself is divine,

but the love for others is a sure sign. 

 

 

Side Note:

This was my Creative Writing Class first activity. Impromptu Poem. 

This poem should contain the following Figure of Speech

Allusion

Antithesis

Apostrophe

Please feel free to correct me. 

 

  • Author: V. G (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2019 07:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: There's no such thing as Perfection, in love.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 12
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Comments2

  • dusk arising

    There is evil in so many places. Engendered by a lack of goodwill to mankind and love.

    Self love is so important you are right. To truly love one another i believe the two should know self love.

    Insanity? - welcome to the insanity club LOL.

    • V

      I thought nobody would understand. lol

    • Suebedoobedoo

      Wonderful! Short and to the point and definately can relate. Great work!

      • V

        Thank you so much



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