Foolish Dream

V

I could swim the seven seas 

to prove my worth and not a disease

my dream pave the way my simpleton mind

and the doors walk towards me consequently, undefined.

 

This life is like the gate of heaven

One-step and your heart will stay where you left if-- uneven. 

 

 

 

SIDE NOTE

HI EVERYONE! It's me again. I will be posting my poems, every day, it is like, my daily feelings kind of thing. 

This poem should have the following figure of speech: Hyperbole, Metaphor, and Personification. 

 

FEEL FREE TO CORRECT ME

FEEL FREE TO ANSWER ME WITH YOURS

 

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  • Author: V. G (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2019 08:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is specifically my life and my dream... It is hard.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 7


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