Over The Hill

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  orchidee August 22nd, 2019 01:39

  I thought was on the theme of age - no?! Keep taking the tablets Orchi! A fine write N.

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 02:11

    thank you my friend...

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  sylviasearcher August 22nd, 2019 02:20

  I started a poem like that once, it ended with a different kind of ache though
  
  There was a longing in this one maybe?

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 02:34

    thank you sylviasearcher my friend.... yes, maybe you are write.... there are so many types of ache aren't there.. some aint so bad... some we kinda want a little bit more of and some.. well ...

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    sylviasearcherAugust 22nd, 2019 02:36

    Sigh!

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  dusk arising August 22nd, 2019 02:25

  Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it with ambition.
  
  Today we see the sage within you.

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 02:30

    thanks DA.. I was hoping someone might see beyond the obvious.... and what a glorious day it is too... Have a good one mate.. N

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  Fay Slimm. August 22nd, 2019 02:34

  That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those too..........such a clever concept Nev. and writ with beguiling covert.

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 02:38

    beguiling covert are my two middle names... thank you mighty big our Fay...

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  Suresh August 22nd, 2019 11:47

  I no longer have a plot of land, thus all I can do is........
  but that's OK too
  no acre, just ache
  
  Throughly enjoyed this one
  
  P.S.
  I was granted a wish to tweet-
  In my excitement a typo error-
  ache instead of acre
  
  Well now I gotta live it- Cest la vie

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 12:25

    thank you my friend .. much appreciated and of course always welcome....
    
    PS: and truly N

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  Laura🌻 August 22nd, 2019 17:22

  Neville,
  
  An interesting and thought provoking write! Many interpretations to be considered!
  
  ~Laura~

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    NevilleAugust 22nd, 2019 17:27

    let me know when you arrive at a conclusion... thank you my friend..
    
    Neville

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    Laura🌻August 22nd, 2019 17:53

    If I do, I’ll share...
    
    You’re very welcome...

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  MendedFences27 August 31st, 2020 16:56

  Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild things. Proper care must be given to grow the intended crop.
  Short and very allegorical. I love the breadth of meaning/s: Land and desire, aging and desire, growth and status-quo, work and idleness, etc. Let's all take the time to nurture our relationships. - Phil A.

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    NevilleAugust 31st, 2020 17:02

    
    You visiting this particular post from almost exactly a year ago is very much appreciated Phil, as is your understanding of it sir....
    
    ... Neville