Kisses & butterflies

Alta H Mabin

Piercing through
my ever insistent darkness
an orchestra of emotions
reaching out
... reaching in

Playfully, 
my dorment butterflies
awaken
by the touch of
your lips on mine

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 28th, 2019 00:23
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • kevin browne

    That's really sweetly written. I love it anfd thanks for the read....

    • Alta H Mabin

      Thank you, Kevin. Thank you for reading my work.

      • kevin browne

        From poet to poetess, you're very welcome....

      • Poetic Dan

        Brilliant and that it does
        Captured well, this thing called love

        • Alta H Mabin

          Thank you so much, Poetic Dan.

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          I love the thought that we all have little dormant butterflies so fragile and playfully released when we're excited
          Wonderful metaphors
          BRAVO

          • Alta H Mabin

            Thanks so much, Andrew. Your comments are really lovely and encouraging.

          • Neville

            the subjective juxtapositioning of repeatedly gentle but longing and urgent kisses and the correspondingly light caress of a butterflies wings is magnificently pulled off here... N

            • Alta H Mabin

              Oh, you gift me with such amazing comments. Thank you, Neville.



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