___A Rainy Day___
Riding alone and deprived
In a carriage for two
My mind is thrashing, nowhere to arrive
I need to find you
My fingers a deep purple
The rain dancing from the clouds
Reminding my quivering self
Of my old, own proud
Self
And of you
It's mocking me
The sound of the pellets
The pellets that ring
Ring in my ears
So loudly, so loudly...
Almost as loudly as my heart
The thing I desperately need to fix...
Here I sit
Listening to my heartbeat
Accompanied by the rains monotonous, enchanting song
But the windows a clear mirror
Of me, the sad sinner
And the rains sympathetic tears
I light my pipe
And try to forget this...
This... nightmare
But I hear her sweet whispers,
Growing seemingly near...
It's the freaking rain!
I look at the grey glass
I let go of the reins
I see her laughing there
My one and only maiden fair
And then my deep pain
As she left for another
At this, my heartbeat began to stutter
And my soul began to flutter
But I swear I hear a mutter...
Her or the rains enchanting voice?
She danced away from my warm lively hands
Into that cold, grey rain
And with me, she left all her pain
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___Compile___
A carriage is traveling
Through the plains, through
The valleys, rainy and low
A carriage meant for two
Sing me to sleep, rain
Let me sigh with relief
Forget what I left you with...
Forget the pain
Stabbing the carriage
My thoughts turn hostile
I thrash and kick
Cry and panic
My bad thoughts compile
All I see is her
She’s smiling at me
She leaves that lonely carriage
And eternally leaves me be
“Goodbye, my darling
How I’ll miss you so!”
The rain fell harder
Against the one-carriage window
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Author:
Tom Wood (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 31st, 2019 23:53
- Comment from author about the poem: These are two poems from completely different times that I had no clue were so similar! It's really weird how close they are, so I thought I would "Compile" (pun intended) these two to get a better product. Anyway, I hope you enjoy these two poems.
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
These...poems that make me cry
and I don't wanna know why.
This peice or peices of work joined together make an almost perfect pf a love youu som much desired, yet the heartaches are the things you do to entice her to fall in love with you. The demise throuhout is truely disastrous, yet every line and word fitted together unlike the love of the pouring saddened rain that managed to soak and almost drown your pain and your sorrow deeply. What an enchanting and lively love pain filled by the emotions you uindergo trying to hold onto what your love carriage carries. The ending caught hold of my heart for you to in the future to hopefully double up upon the two seats with both of you falling in love as you so desired to do so. I love it, To Wood and kep this good work up as you grow into adult filled with such beauty and more. I really love this and thank you for sharing...
Yes, good writesTom, linking together well.
Ccoooeeee (Hi), I'm here! heehee. You'll find me right here.
I wish I would shut up sometimes - lol.(me being daft).
I definitely think you still carry the same pain with you and its flowing into your work... Beautiful words; a pleasure to read.
CLARA X
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