God's Chosen

Kevin Michael Bloor

When I feel low and lonely

My love, my one and only,

Will smile at me and say,

“These blues will blow away,

 

And how can you feel lonely?

I am your one and only;

I’ll never go away

Until my dying day!”

 

When I feel weak and worthless,

Most miserable and mirthless,

My lovely lady sings,

Like angel without wings:

 

“Since when have you been worthless,

Most miserable and mirthless?

You’re singularly, strong;

God’s chosen all along!”

  • Author: Blue-eyed Bolla (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 1st, 2019 08:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: for my one and only, Lorraine
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 14
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  • dusk arising

    Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a lot more freedom. You are obviously a serious and commited poet as you regularly post on mps.
    Rhyming lines restricts ones available vocabulary.

    • Kevin Michael Bloor

      I do agree with you about the limitations of rhyme. I feel though, if the rhyme is not forced, then you should ok. I have attempted writing without rhyme, but it was a failure. I think for longer poems rhyme is not appropriate. (I agree with Milton here, see his intro to Paradise Lost) I try to keep mine short and sweet. Thanks for your feedback, it was much appreciated. 😉



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