Rain of Forgiveness

Nafis Light

When it rains...time stops
for us to step into it;
The rain then continues
and in every hitting raindrops,
Little dark scars within are purified
and painful past memories are healed;
Within the hitting drops,
We hold ourselves;
Seeing flashes of the past and present
Droplets of Forgiveness...Unforgiveness Pops.

 

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With Love and Smile,
J44

  • Author: Nafis Light (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 4th, 2019 04:35
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 47
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.
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Comments4

  • Laura🌻

    J44,

    Imagine to think of ‘hitting raindrops’ as purifying the ‘Little dark scars’...

    These two quotable lines are exceptional!

    ‘Little dark scars within are purified
    and painful past memories are healed;’...

    A brilliant write!

    Thank you for sharing!

    ~Laura~

  • dusk arising

    I read the refreshing renewal rain can bring to our spirit. That dash from shelter to shelter in inappropriate clothes. Envigorating. Changes us a little somehow.

    Natures tiny baptism on repeat perhaps?

    • Nafis Light

      Possibly so.

      It's been like two days I didn't post something here, and I did try to look for inspiration but couldn't. Just luckily I could make that poem.

    • orchidee

      A fine write J44.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Raindrops invigorate if we stay and let them hit us a while - stress seems to fade under the splash of water... a lovely read J.



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