I loved you once , was it useless?
But now I think it was a total mess.....
Early days were bright as sunshine...and you were mine.....
The days passed by and you made me cry.....
The first day I saw you , the smile on your lips made me blush...
Confused what to utter, but your words made my heart flutter....
I know the time was not right...but I fell for you in very first sight...
I know you have found a new interest,
So you decided it's time to rest...
I totally agree your gain..but it seems I am in pain ...
But now I don't matter......
So I think our relationship should shatter.....
I loved you once , was it useless?
But now I think it was a total mess......
- Author: shiv ( Offline)
- Published: September 7th, 2019 08:08
- Comment from author about the poem: Love can even hurt u....!!!
- Category: Love
- Views: 20
Comments5
Love can definitely hurt you. Heart break is certainly one of the worst types of pain... An invisible battle. Great work..
CLARA X
Thanku
I never really believed but in time we do find, the cracks just help us shine.
It's never easy but worth it!
Much peace and respect
Yes ..pain does make us shine sometimes..
Amazing write about pain, this resonates deeply.
Thanku
Loss of love and the heartbreak/heartache can be the beginning of learning about who we really are. A very painful time. A time which passes and slowly a new dawn arises.
Good emotive writing.
Thanku
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