Rain dance

Alta H Mabin

Sing your beautiful
lullaby to me
drizzled with your
silver drops

I cry with you
we dance
the dance
of aching souls

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 9th, 2019 00:16
  • Category: Nature
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Alta.
    No, please! Not a rain dance; not more just now! (heehee). But we need it as well as sun.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Thanks so much, Orchidee. Oh, yes we need the rainbows too.

    • Neville

      Beautiful...

      I am not convinced the poem pinned to this page is entirely dedicated to rain though .. I think there is something so much deeper , just below the surface...regardless of whether I am right or a million miles off mark, I still applaud the author...... Neville

      • Alta H Mabin

        You do know the said author leaves a lot to be imagined. Thanks so much, Neville.

      • Alan .S. Jeeves

        Good to see you know that there is sunshine within the rain Alta

        Kind regards from under my umbrella Alan,

        • Alta H Mabin

          Oh, thanks so much, Alan. Yes, I certainly do and let's not forget the rainbow too.

          Many thanks

        • Fay Slimm.

          That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our sorrows - a sensitive piece Alta.

          • Alta H Mabin

            Thanks for your lovely comment, Fay.

          • dusk arising

            Dance away life's heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow, dance - be born again.

            But if we are dancing in the rain please, please be warm summers rain.

            • Alta H Mabin

              You gifted me with giggles. Thanks for your beautiful comment.

            • Suresh

              How do we differentiate tears from drops when standing in the rain - one stings.

              • Alta H Mabin

                Yes, "stings". Perfect word, thank you.



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