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Endless Circles

It begins again.
The pen, long dormant,
comes alive as it starts
to skim the paper
like a smooth stone thrown
off the surface of the water.
The words spill out,
stirring the stars to
cast endless circles around her
while revealing their light,
a light which has
guided her verses of prose.
The spark is no longer contained
igniting across her mouth,
burning spirals of colors
that float out the window
colliding with a frigid night air
leaving her to bask
in its afterglow.

Comments4

  • dusk arising

    Yes i agree. When inspired, it is as if another spirit, another force, indeed a righteous force has overtaken me and commands my vocabulary.

    A definite relief rests upon me then.

  • Poetic Dan

    Absolutely brilliant!
    Thank you

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    WELCOME FRIEND TO MPS ! It is a very empathetic site so you will get some positive comments ! Thanks for your first Poem. It is an excellent FREE VERSE POEM in 19 modulated lines which give it great rhythm ! It has thre distinct STANZAS 7 6 6 Which you have chosen not to separate ! I love the SUBJECT ! The stiring and initiation of the MUSE ! You have used some excellent phrases !
    1. The PEN long dormant
    2. The words spill out
    3. Burning spirals of color
    4. Leaving her to bask in its afterglow !
    Our MUSES can be inspired by Situations - Music - Pictures & Experience etc. Brian & I are engaged and we often collaborate on Poems through SKYPE. BRIAN is in England - I am a PHYSIOTHERRAPIST in New Zealand on a work exchange ! Please check our POEMS - What US State are you in ?

    Blessings & Peace & Joy
    Yours ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

  • DeviLove

    Love the visualization this poem gives! Amazing work!



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