Carnival

Whit Howland

Illusion's when

you close your eyes

the blinds flip up

 

a collage

 

a wonky piece

played by ghostly keys

a carnival piano

 

 at the end

of the midway

the journey's circular

 

an eye

 

the Ferris Wheel

 

Whit Howland © 2019




  • Author: Whit Howland (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2019 10:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: A word picture with some wordplay.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    WELCOME WHIT ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very imaginative ! We both love CARNIVALS and when one closes ones eyes and thinks of CARNIVALS anything can happen !
    Love the structure of the POEM

    The blinds flip up
    wonky piece - ghostly keys - carnival piano
    circular journey
    ferris wheel

    We could SEE & FEEL them all - AMEN

    Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
    ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

    • Whit Howland

      Thanks so much for reading it. I am glad you enjoyed it.



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