Illusion's when
you close your eyes
the blinds flip up
a collage
a wonky piece
played by ghostly keys
a carnival piano
at the end
of the midway
the journey's circular
an eye
the Ferris Wheel
Whit Howland © 2019
- Author: Whit Howland ( Offline)
- Published: September 30th, 2019 10:22
- Comment from author about the poem: A word picture with some wordplay.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 47
Comments1
WELCOME WHIT ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very imaginative ! We both love CARNIVALS and when one closes ones eyes and thinks of CARNIVALS anything can happen !
Love the structure of the POEM
The blinds flip up
wonky piece - ghostly keys - carnival piano
circular journey
ferris wheel
We could SEE & FEEL them all - AMEN
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
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Thanks so much for reading it. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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