Maybe.
In the pit of the night though cold
is curtained and
fittingly covered is my yearning
for thee, some vain
hope decides to unsleep and keep
me wide-eyed 'til
morn again has for certain broken.
When laid low
by memory I find myself clinging
close to thy
pillow and think of that presence
its hollow holds.
At last a slow winning of pale over
grey as dawn's
rosy fingers bid me away, I go to
remain at my
window until tide is high, for this
time it maybe
the one that is bringing thee safe
home again.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The image brought its own inspiration and hence the poem - - - I hope you enjoy.
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Maybe - or rather certainly - this is a good write Fay!
Well a big thank you for your thoughts on the verse and your encouraging comment dear Orchi......
GOOD MORNING FAY - ANGELA here (8pm WED evening !) Love the picture that stirred your MUSE *Til the BOATS CUM IN !* The wife of a Deep Sea Fishherman is a fearful & lonely one - cos often they fish at night ! There are more Men Lost @ Sea than this world dreams of. Brian & I are separated but I know he is not in danger from *SEA or SIRENS* and He knows I am keeping all the Male Maoris & Kiwis at arms length ! Ruth & I chaperone each other ! My massages are purely therapeutic ! Please check our Collab on Roses - You will feel the LOVE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Very true Angela that a deep sea fisherman leads a lonely and dangerous life - I thought too the women who wait back at home deserve their tribute too......... glad you enjoyed the read. and a big thank you for your comment my friend.
Optimistic. Nice poem. I like the way you handle words.
My sincere thank you chani for dropping by and leaving a comment on the verse Maybe - -- - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
a longing song...
you really are a poet my friend ...
Mucho thank-yu for saying so Nev............. really appreciate your kind support - -you spoil me I know - -but I like it.......... ha...................... glad you enjoyed the read ................. Fay
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful and has to be a Favourite.
Very big thank yous for judging this verse to be with your favs. my friend - - waiting for a man to come home after being at sea can be moving when tide after tide brings his boat no nearer........ glad you saw something of this in the read.
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