I left school ealry
I didn’t match my shoes
I haven’t cried in a week
I slept all day
I ate a lot
Im not as sad as I used to be
I was happy yesterday
i dont want to be sad
I used to be sad
I am not sad
I am not sad
I am not sad
I am not sad
I am happy today
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Author:
izzyo4 (
Offline) - Published: October 3rd, 2019 01:51
- Comment from author about the poem: First attempt I am v sensitivities and not a serious writer don’t attack me ):
- Category: Sad
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U suck !
I question why you posted this comment... Maybe try not to attack yourself?
Welcome to MPS. It's rather lovely here.
ANGELA HERE - Welcome to MPS IZZY - Thanks for your First Poem ! Writing & sharing POETRY is CATHARTIC - it lifts you up and gives you a new perspective on LIFE ! Reading between the lines - I guess you are telling US :
You are no longer as SAD as you used to be !
And that today you are really HAPPY - AMEN !
The transformation - in your mood - in this POEM - Made me Smile - just like TEPO so the Poem was CATHARTIC for us too ! Thanks for sharing - more please !
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poetry and responding to comments ! I share this SITE with my FIANCE BRIAN ! Please check our POEM today *Discovering a new Cave !* - THANKS A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
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