'Don't Ever Leave Me'
These are the words
That I thought
Would remain
Unheard,
'Don't ever leave me',
Would this later
Deceive me?
The voice of one
Caught,
In the middle
Of distraught-
Holding onto
The minute
Where all time
Becomes
Mine,
When the love,
Doubles up,
And your eyes
Become
Blind
To the lies
Of the mind,
Is when
The words
That he said,
Penetrated
My head-
That heart-
Even though
Falling apart-
Had found
A way to
Come around
To the
Truth
Of the
Matter-
That it
Is such
That sad
Day,
That took
You out of
Your way,
But you
Found
Your way
Back,
Through the
Love
You've now
Found-
That caused
These words
Now been said,
To
Give you
Peace
In your
Head-
And let's hope you would
Now
Be lead,
To these words
To be said-
'I will never leave you,
Or
Deceive you-
This love that
We've found,
Can't be touched,
Or
Brought down-
Its common ground
That we've now
Found,
And there needs
To be
No sound.'
Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
2017
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Thoughts In Time (Pseudonym) (
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OK, I'll stay. I won't leave ya! heehee.
Yay🌹
ANGELA HERE - Thanks KELLY for a very beautiful Love Poem - in both Structure & Subject ! We Ladies perhaps feel the ECSTASY & AGONY of LOVE to a greater degree than MEN because Females are wired more EMOTIONALLY than Males ? This is my experience ! In a codicil on my Love Poem today (DESTINY ?) I state that LOVE is CAPRICIOUS and in my past experience it IS. I love you LOVE POEM because it has a very positive denoument - so many POEMS on MPS end in DISPAIR ! You have increased the Poetic Quality of MPS - THANKS !
Love - Joy & Peace
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
ANGELA HERE - Thanks KELLY for a very beautiful Love Poem - in both Structure & Subject ! We Ladies perhaps feel the ECSTASY & AGONY of LOVE to a greater degree than MEN because Females are wired more EMOTIONALLY than Males ? This is my experience ! In a codicil on my Love Poem today (DESTINY ?) I state that LOVE is CAPRICIOUS and in my past experience it IS. I love you LOVE POEM because it has a very positive denoument - so many POEMS on MPS end in DISPAIR ! You have increased the Poetic Quality of MPS - THANKS !
Love - Joy & Peace
ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Oh bless your heart..Thankyou my dearest and I’m glad you enjoyed it..sometimes love is not an easy thing to understand but we need to see it as truth in truth of self and destiny ..choices lead us to where we land up and it’s a hard wonderful mysterious journey one I may never understand ..but the truth I have found..it’s called love ..and it just need it to find me outside of my love for myself...what’s meant to be will always find a way so I carry on in belief as less than that I do not need..blessings in abundance with much love and happiness always🌹
what a lovely Thoughts in Time post you have shared with us all today....
It’s my pleasure and thankyou 🌹
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