Lamar Cole

Party Line

She was so pretty and fine.

And he met her on the telephone party line.

She was talking to a friend.

And he was secretly listening in.

So he decided to give her a call.

And for him he made her in love fall.

Comments2

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    GOOD AFTERNOON LAMAR ~ Welcome to MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Well penned and an unteresting TALE ! Its difficult not to listen in when you hit a Party Line ! We*ll forgive this time because he got a RESULT ! Love the ELIZABETHAN word order in your last line ~ but you did at least manage to preserve the RHYME which is very importamt in Performance Poetry ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Please check our site. We are an engaged Couple and share a site !

    Blessings to You & Yours
    ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

  • Bragee

    Sweet and enjoyable!
    Good Writing



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