Fretfully aching to feel fit as a fiddle

Unsolicited feedback

across rock of ages woke

beguiling ghostly busty spectre

courtesy Marie-Antoinette,

(i.e. bride of France's arty choke

King Louis XVI) bespoke

let him eat cake, and (sic)

send back the bloody bloke,

aye suddenly begot idea rye

Jack Corner of zee desk

didst impale and provoke

moderately painful injury

right side rib cage

analogous to intriguing

unfortunate circumstance

mysterious secret shrouded

as dagger and cloak

(think Alfred E. Neuman,

viz MAD Magazine), yes no joke

lovely bones of me body electric,

(particularly right side rib cage)

severely traumatized, nailed, injured...

crucified oft told umteen times,

yet omitting key mirrors and smoke,

significant Dorian Gray parallel,

when former antique,

viz secrétaire looking glass reflection,

spider hairline fractures radiated

resembled bay of pigs in a poke

ham handedly oinked,

quaked, shattered... broke

into bajillion pieces

deafening, exploding,

glowering thunder stroke

jagged shrapnel size shards

unleashed cosmic force

lacerated, gnashed, beribboned...

impeaching flesh with

one engulfed masterstroke,

no rhyme nor reason aiming to choke

off promising poet (ha) of corpse

resembling scrambled egg yolk

posthumous fame besmoke

salvaged mine besmirched reputation

courtesy humble cartoon character

bugs bunny and kinfolk spoke

daffy fully eulogizing humor did evoke.