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Taking a break!

You taught me how to love again

To understand what it really means

To open & share my heart freely

To know what it feels like, really

 

I’m whole again, no longer broke

Repaired by the loving words you spoke

Held my hand, kissed my cheek

I fall deeper in love with you the more you speak

 

You found my loving side again

Made me know my soul can still sing

To smile & laugh again freely

To know what it feels like, really

 

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Comments5

  • Laura

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    Perfect! Don’t change anything.

    I’m positive Carys will love it as your ‘Mum’ does...
    and I as well!🤗

    Regards as always...

    ~Laura~


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      Laura,

      Ok so that’s you & my mum who agree it’s fine. Thanks

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      • Laura

        Yes, it’s me and your ‘Mum’...
        and you know very well that she loves you dearly!😉
        Have a good night!😴

      • myself and me

        Your appreciation are fully expressed in it. Can't be better.

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          m&m,

          appreciate the view. If she don't like it I'm blaming you! LOL!

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        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          ANGELA HERE - Good Evening UNSUB - Perfect as it is ! Brian has a romantic side and I love to get a Billet Doux from HIM !

          Blessings & Peace ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡

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            A,

            it seems to be that this is perfect. I'm not keen on perfect when it comes to my writing; I'm nevert 100% happy!

            Thanks

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          • Goldfinch60

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            The light in your world will be delighted by your wonderful words.

            Andy

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              Andy,

              maybe!

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            • orchidee

              Yes - no changes needed. Woof! Fido does not always bark in disapproval as an 18+ watchdog. He also barks in approval!

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                orchi,

                glad both the real & Fido the not so real approve.

                thanks

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