When my soul was heavy and blue,
There was a demon in my view.
On my should, in my ear,
Whispering, “Can you hear?”
I tried not to listen to his beautiful voice,
The beauty that he offered left me with no choice.
So with a demon in my view,
My soul turned so heavy and blue.
His voice was one I tried to refuse,
But it whispered so loudly that surely you could hear it too.
This demon in my view.
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Author:
Allie Ratliff (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 18th, 2019 17:46
- Category: Reflection
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ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING ALLIE ! Welcome to MPS it is a pro-active site and functions by reading & commenting on each other POEMS - OK. Thanks for your first Poem - love the STRUCTURE (Rhyming couplets - my fave) and the SUBJECT - DEMONS - We All have them from time to time ! In my experience I dont hear the actual DEMON - BUT - I do see the effects ! Im a PHYSIOTHERAPIST and I lot of my CLIENTS have DEMONS. I can placate them with ACUPUNCTURE also Massage with ALMOND OIL. The efect of ACUPUNCTURE & Oil Massage on peoples MINDS as well as their bodies is very interesting ! Do you like YOUR DEMON(S) or have you tried to eliminate or subdue them ?
Blessings & Peace & Joy @ Christmas
Yours ANGELA 🧡💚🧡💚🧡
Brian is my Fiancee & we share the site !
Excellent, love a bit of temptation in poetry.
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