Finding what is right within me and you;
Unable to find...just feeling blue;
Unknown of what is true,
Only that this cold feeling is something good.
Good for me
Good for the environment
Good for you
Good for the moment.
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Find another answer
Drop into another fever
Just give in and be a giver
Who knows...this is for the best.
S
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Think again for a moment
What is there but something that makes me frozen?
Coldness arising till I reach realization,
That this is a form of transformation...shift.
R
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Back to you...I asked;
Back to me...I basked
In sleepless night at last;
Tomorrow...something else I will ask...myself.
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Bright Blessings and Love,
Joker44
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Author:
Nafis Light (
Offline) - Published: December 29th, 2019 03:45
- Category: Spiritual
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ANGELA AQUI - Good Evening J44 ! A Mi piaci LUNA Some aspects in your elegant Poem reflect some concepts in this beautiful song ~ OK
YOU MOON ~ Only you can hear my soul !
How many are the songs that resonate
You wish that through the ages
They had crossed the sky to reach you
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This human heart does not know
That love can hide pain
How a fire can burn your soul
YOU MOON ~ only you can hear my soul !
Love your Poem ! I like the elongated words Turning - Stop - Return ~ that link the four stanzas like a spine ! Center the POEM to see this orientation ~ OK What are the sentiments in each stanza ?
S 1. Finding what is right ~ good for the Environment - You & the Moment ~ AMEN !
S 2. Finding another answer ~ Just give in and be a giver !
S 3. Think again ~ what makes me Frozen ? This is a transformation !
S 4. Back to YOU ~ Back to ME ! This is something I will ask myself ~ TOMORROW !
Your Poems are some of the most enigmatic on MPS !
Blessings & Peace for You & Yours for 2020
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
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