Maxine Smith

Beauty of words

As your ink flows 

I read as it glows 

With every word chose 

The beauty unfolds 

 

With your words I see

Fairytales of possibility 

I read helplessly 

Your words have a hold over me

 

With finesse and meaning 

The souls your words are healing 

Breathlessness with feeling 

Yes your words are worth the reading 

Comments8

  • Nemo

    Yes indeed your words are worth a reading ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

  • dusk arising

    Ah the essence of what we poets wish we could hear/read from every one of our readers.
    Written like a well penned thriller with a natural progression to the final point of validation.
    Easy to read and a pleasure to read.

    • Maxine Smith

      Iโ€™m really happy you like it, thank you.

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      words,let you look into my soul,let you see the beauty that i hold,let you feel my heart

    • Suresh

      So few words, take us on a very long journey of fairytale, healing sand feelings.

      • Maxine Smith

        This is very true, thanks for reading.

      • Goldfinch60

        Very true of your words Maxine.

        • Maxine Smith

          Thank you so much Andy, sending my thoughts and my love.

        • orchidee

          I never knew my words had that much effect on ya! You mean me? or including me? heehee. Pity the same can't be said about my singing! lol.

          • Maxine Smith

            Haha I can always rely on you for a little humour.
            Thanks for stopping by Ochidee.

          • FineB

            Hello Maxine,

            A wonderful write with words.

            Keep writing FineB

            • Maxine Smith

              Thank you.

              Appreciate the lovely comment.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              ANGELA HERE - Good evening Maxine - Thanks for your appreciation of all our ODD ODES ! When we enter the World of Poetry - in any language - we quickly realise that it is in essence JUST WORDS ! However what makes each Poet unique - and some of the very memorable - is their CHOICE and ARRANGEMENT of those WORDS into something that looks beautiful (STRUCTURE) and sounds beautiful (RHYME & RHYTHM) and makes sense (SUBJECT & REASON) correct use of Grammar (SPELLING etc) is also important ! Be patient with us and accept that we all do our best in the presentation of our Poetry and can follow the accepted rules of Acroatics - Sonnets - Pantoums & Haiku etc etc. These are the elements of Classical Poetry. Modern Poetry has NO RULES of Grammer - Rhyme - Rhythm or Reason but is still acceptables as a GENRE. We try to be ENCOURAGERS of New Poets and are willing to give advice if asked - OK Thanks for all your comments & encouragement !

              Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
              Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก



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