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Poetic Dan

Last night I found a beautiful post, that then asked anyone to leave a shorty using journey & marching. 

As the shadows moved marching me on, my journey was but a rainbow into the sun....

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2020 04:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Sadly my mood has not shifted, but I'm here for another day of existence.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Where ya going? When will ya get there? How will ya know when you've got there? (heehee)!
    Keep on journeying, even if it only seems like 'existing' sometimes.
    Well - you're here - that's good enough, if nothing else!

    • Poetic Dan

      Yes... Here, now and when someone asks me with a (heehee)! 😉

      Always appreciated my friend

    • dusk arising

      Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and achievements are as a rainbow in the sun. For the sun will be there for eons and we shall not. But there are days when there is no rain nor rainbow and we can enjoy the sunshine (seen u doing it in yer videos).

      Life is not a bowl of cherries and it can seem that lifes rewards are handed out unfairly.

      As soon as i wrote that my mind went to that 'desiderata' piece i showed you some while back. It's an amazing piece and it lifts me in those times when my spirit wains.

      • Poetic Dan

        Pmsl.. Cherry is my code word, so my "bowl" is mostly full but never empty. Yet no amount of self medication can truly free you from yourself, maybe that's why at last resort people chase the dragon!

        Your support and choice of words never fail to bring your authenticity to sit with my soul!

        It a true pleasure to be given your time, thank you!



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