Maxine Smith

-x- ๐Ÿ‘ผ My Angels ๐Ÿ‘ผ -x-

Hello my beautiful angles,

I hope your behaving up there

Spreading your joy around the world,

I joy I never saw unfold


This year you both would be seven,

Instead you’l play up in heaven

Please know your never forgotten,

In my heart your always cherished


I feel I hear you in the nights,

To tell me sweet dreams and goodnight

I believe your still here with me,

My angles FOREVER with me


  • Nemo

    I don't know why, there's nothing I could relate to, but I just started crying non stop.
    Very well written โ™ฅ๏ธ

    • Maxine Smith

      Aww I hope your okay, thank you so much, this write means a lot to me.

    • Michael Edwards

      This is real heart string tugger even for an old geezer like me - super write Maxine.

      • Maxine Smith

        Thank you so much Michael.

      • Fay Slimm.

        A heart-breaking read Maxine - - do hope this writing is not from experience - - like Nemo I am rendered near tears.

        • Maxine Smith

          Yes I lost my little angels after I had Charlie.
          Never got to meet them but I know their always with me.
          Thanks for the read Fay.

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          HI MAXINE - Angela here - A cousin of mine had all the immence JOY of expecting TWINS and then (due to complications) thy were both *Still Born* We had a proper funeral for closure - but emotionally she will never ever recover ! She is a Practicing Catholic and - as you have indicated in your very moving Poem - she feels their presence 24/7 and hopes to be reunited with them - in Heaven - some day !

          Very noving & very Cathartic ~ AMEN
          Blessings & Peace & Joy & Our Prayers
          Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful emotive write, they will be forever with you Maxine.


        • orchidee

          A sensitive write Maxine.

        • FineB

          Hi Maxine,

          Thank you for this wonderful write.

          Your angels are around you protecting and watching over you.

          Keep writing FineB

          • Maxine Smith

            Appreciate that FineB

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