Maxine Smith

Tears


T racing down my tender cheeks

E motion  drops filled with defeat

A nguish from inside pours out

R ivers flowing uncontrollably

S orrowing storms still ahead of me

Comments6

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    GOOD EVENING MAXINE - ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing your Pain. We FEMALES are generally more sensitive than MALES and never ashamed to CRY in PUBLIC - AMEN.
    We note the reasons for your TEARS - Defeat - Anguish & predicted Storms of Sorrow etc ! We are PRAYING that these will soon be resolved and the TEARS replaced with JOY - AMEN !

    Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
    Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

    • Maxine Smith

      Thanks for reading B&A.

    • Goldfinch60

      Such a wonderful and very emotive write Maxine.

      Andy

      • Maxine Smith

        Glad you like it Andy.

      • orchidee

        A sensitive write Maxine.
        Meanwhile (me being daft) - Oohh, dry ya tears gal. I never knew me singing would cause ya such upset. I only said 'I'll sing ya a song or three'. Though that's enough to make anyone burst out crying! heehee.

        • Maxine Smith

          Haha thanks for reading Ochidee.

        • orchidee

          Here's another thing - Ken Dodd only shed tears cos they found out about his non-payment of taxes! He was singing 'Happiness' before that - well, he would be - 'I'm alright Jack!'
          It's fraudulent - we can't condone it. Why should he get away with it?

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          i guess we all hurt ( sometimes )
          but not for long,life will play you another song

          • Maxine Smith

            Looking forward for my next song. Thanks for reading Ron.

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              you`re welcome,,i need to try and write a song

            • ZIGGY

              Hi there not read any of your words before, how you crafted this is very clever so I have favoured this one,, zigs

              • Maxine Smith

                Well nice to meet you Ziggy, thanks for reading.
                Il be sure to check out some of your work.
                Thank you for the save.



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