PhilPoet

Monochrome Vision

 

Where are you going

Cute white rabbit,

Friendly grey turtle,

Little black scottie dog.

 

Which country

Did you come from?

Australia,

India,

Americas

Changing geographies

On tectonic whisps.

 

I guess you’re

In no hurry,

Moving slowly,

Getting to where

You’ve got to go.

 

I’m lying down

Watching your moves;

Even with eyes closed

I follow your progress.

 

Like a monochrome hallucination

You move and merge,

Morph and mysteriously

Disappear and

Reappear as new

Characters in your

Sky blue set.

Comments3

  • Nicholas Browning

    This is trippy. Means it must be good.

  • PhilPoet

    Thanks for commenting.
    I guess at one level it is trippy...but it's about other stuff as well.
    I'm interested to hear interpretations because I think I lack giving enough clear guidance in my poems as to what on earth they are about 🙃

  • Nemo

    Haha, I am confused 😅

    • PhilPoet

      Haha! Success! (Or not).

      I must try harder to be more specific.



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