Afton flows

the ripples touching

in every direction

stones thrown

and wild she is

with passion


and mirroring herself

her emotions

Oh, River Afton

you run so deep

convulsing and thrashing

angry with tide



and collected

with pride

Oh, Afton

you run

where to hide?





    ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Friend - Welcome to MPS ! You will find it an enpathetic site - it works for reading & commenting on each others odes - OK.
    Thanks for your first Poem - I love its shape & dynamic & the message. Our lives are like Rivers flowing through Time & Space ! WE run deep - we run shallow - we run turbulant (angry) and we run cool ! Depending on the climate & our circumstances. However - like a River - we continue to run (flow) but none of us knows our final destiny - c*est la Vie !

    Blessings & Peace & Joy
    Yours ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก
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