Afton flows
the ripples touching
in every direction
stones thrown
and wild she is
with passion
reflecting
and mirroring herself
her emotions
Oh, River Afton
you run so deep
convulsing and thrashing
angry with tide
calm
cool
and collected
with pride
Oh, Afton
you run
where to hide?
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Author:
WriteRaw (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Friend - Welcome to MPS ! You will find it an enpathetic site - it works for reading & commenting on each others odes - OK.
Thanks for your first Poem - I love its shape & dynamic & the message. Our lives are like Rivers flowing through Time & Space ! WE run deep - we run shallow - we run turbulant (angry) and we run cool ! Depending on the climate & our circumstances. However - like a River - we continue to run (flow) but none of us knows our final destiny - c*est la Vie !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
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