Maxine Smith

Beauty

My body is a temple

Scarred and pleasantly plump

A haven worth respecting

Imperfections through head to toe

 

My heart is an Island

Yearning for a visit

A wistful sanctuary

My retreat of indulgence

 

My spirit is a river

Venturing through time

Inseparable from the journey of dreams

As entwining the promise land

 

My souis my guide

Growth from Inside and out

mentor through the storms

Shelter till the sun returns

 

Leading the path of my future

Comments9

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Angela here ~ WOW Maxine you have created A Gem ! Love the Mantra in your Fisrt Lines !

    My Body is a Temple
    My Heart is an Island
    My Spirit is a River
    My Soul is my Guide
    Leading to the Path of my Future

    Thanks also for the highlighted Manta ~ Beauy Within Us All !

    Love the poem ~ If we dont respect ourselves we cant help others to improve & enjoy life. I look in a Mirror and see An Angel ~ what do you see ?

    Thnaks for sharing & caring
    Love ANGELA šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

    • Maxine Smith

      Iā€™m really happy you enjoyed and thank you for the save.

      Glad you love the message to.

      Thanks so much.

    • Nemo

      Like the new style šŸ‘Œ
      Very well written as well šŸŒ¹

      • Maxine Smith

        Thank you.

        I thought Iā€™d give this one a try after seeing LG incredible poem.

      • Poetic Dan

        Outstandingly done! Great motivation! Thank you

        • Maxine Smith

          Your very welcome.

          Thanks so much for the comment.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Perfectly poemed this beauty of you dear Maxine - certainly must be read by me again - - so saved to my faves. and thank you for sharing.

          • Maxine Smith

            Thank you so much for the save.

            Such a lovely comment Fay, thank you.

          • Fractured Dreams

            Beautiful structure and pretty poem

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful write Maxine and so very true, beauty is within us all.

            Andy

            • Maxine Smith

              It certainly is.

              Thanks for the comment Andy.

            • orchidee

              A LovElY wRitE MaXine. There, that's my effort! C'mon. Orchi, put more thought into it! heehee.

              • Maxine Smith

                Haha a great attempt there Orchi.

                Thanks for the comment šŸ˜€

              • FineB

                Hi Maxine,

                A beautiful write on Beauty!

                Keep writing FineB

              • little dove

                Lovely poem very well written and nice imagery )



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