Falling into You.

flumptydoodle

Limitless time may be as it slows down to perfectly capture sun-kissed lips.

The heart of that same soul beams with light that is unexplainable with the vocabulary of beings that wander and ponder a meaning.
A meaning that they could have, no doubt, because all humans think about their own meaning.

But the sun-kissed lips and the heart of golden shimmers, it doesn't think. It flows with life as if it were, itself, life. 

It is but one of a kind. It is the only one of its kind. It holds value beyond anything, beyond extraterrestrial. 

However, it's the wheel of worry that turns rapidly. The wheel of doubt churns and vomits.

Soon enough, one person will break through and fall into the abyss of You.
They WILL fall and you will not doubt yourself.

You will not have knowledge of limits to their love for you. You will NOT have knowledge of how far they can push you and how far you can push them.

When your mind takes in the words of a soul, it begins to wander. It begins to see more colour and feel more passion.
That passion and colour needs to be held onto. And whoever makes you feel and see, you MUST NEVER let them run away through the meadows.

You will soon realise that they are falling. Falling and unable to stop. 

But they are falling into the abyss of You. Your soul, your heart, your mind and your life.
Test them. Throw all at them that has been thrown at you.

They say that they will stay with you through thick and thin. Give them the chance to prove that. Let them through the gates of your Hell. If they survive, and they survive for you, then they are deserving of entrance to your Heaven.

They have fallen into the abyss of You, and that is probably their greatest achievement.

  • Author: flumptydoodle (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 22nd, 2020 18:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem with not much consideration brain-wise, however I let my hands type and my soul pour out. Reading it right now, I like it.
  • Category: Love
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  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    BRIAN HERE (Angela is my Fiancee). Hi FLUMPTY DOODLE (great pen name) ~ welcome to MPS ! I was born in Liverpool ~ great City ~ great Poetic Tradition ! John Lennon ~ Roger McGough ~ Adrian Hendry etc. I like this Poem too ! You acknowledge that it is SPONTANEOUS and that is its greatest strength ! It is a good example of a modern free-verse Poem ~ full of rhythm and easy to recite !
    It speaks of Sun Kissed Lips (SKL) and their meaning ! SKL are enticing and someone will fall into them ! It speaks of the limits of Love ~ in my experience they are infinite ! Wen someone falls for you you should hold on to them ! However they will occupy your Soul - Heart & Mind and they will stay with you !
    My only comment ~ to improve the structure of the Poem would be to space it more poetically. The final verse would read ................

    They say they will stay with you through thick and thin,
    Give them a chance to prove that.
    let them through the gates of your Hell.
    If they survive, and they survive for you,
    Then they are deserving of entance to your Heaven.
    They have fallen into the abyss of You
    And that is probably their greatest achievment !

    I hope this helps ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please
    Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
    Please check our site ~ Thanks B & A.

    • flumptydoodle

      Thank you for the constructive criticism! This helps me a lot. I'll be sure to think about how I could improve my poems in this way when writing in the future.



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