There come a day

There comes a day in which you realize 

you made it through 

you made it through the worst time in your life 

There comes a day in which you realize 

you can make it through everything 

you did it 

You can do it again 

and you will survive 

because you're a survivor 


  • Alan .S. Jeeves

    Good nine liner here Jack, not before time though, it's nearly a month since you last posted. As LG says others may need your inspiration ~ more than you think. Writing poetry is a huge responsibility but we believe that you can handle that just fine. Can't wait till you're telling me where I'm going wrong.
    p.s. Glad you traded your profile pic. for a smiley one, it looks just like yoooooooooo.

    Ex animo, Alan

  • Maxine Smith

    I love this powerful uplifting write.

    Really pulling us in with ...

    You can do it

    Your a survivor

    I felt the feeling of ‘yes I can do it’ after I finished reading.

    Your written a perfect little pick me up for us all to enjoy.

    Well done.

  • Fay Slimm.

    Such a positive vibe comes from this posting - I am glad that I caught your work today Jack. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.

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