Fiery love

bellskie

amore 

fictional 

magic 

I was lit up 

 

blinding 

unconditional 

infinite 

my fire grew wild 

 

painful 

fictional 

fucked 

ashes 

  • Author: bellskie (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 4th, 2020 08:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: My first poem, I would really appreciate feedback💕💕
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 30
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Comments2

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    BRIAN HERE (I share this site with ANGELA my Fiancee) Hi BELLSKIE welcome to MPS. It is a very active site and New Members are always WELCOME ! Thanks for your first POEM ! Hot firey abstract Visual and a SIZZLING POEM ! Angela & I are getting married in APRIL ~ So I can relate (in anticipation !) to verses 1 & 2. Verse 3. suggests *AMORE BURN OUT* sounds painful ! Thanks for sharing your FIRST POEM ~ MORE PLEASE !

    Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
    Please check our site ~ Thanks - B & A !

    • bellskie

      Thank you so much, it means a lot to me. I love how you could relate to this. Also congrats about the weeding x

    • Bragee

      Fiery indeed!
      Nicely written piece!
      Captures the essence of telling a story while allowing the reader the creat a self applicable visual.
      Keep Writing!

      • bellskie

        Thank you so much for reading and giving me feedback 💟



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