amore
fictional
magic
I was lit up
blinding
unconditional
infinite
my fire grew wild
painful
fictional
fucked
ashes
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Author:
bellskie (
Offline) - Published: February 4th, 2020 08:50
- Comment from author about the poem: My first poem, I would really appreciate feedback💕💕
- Category: Love
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Comments2
BRIAN HERE (I share this site with ANGELA my Fiancee) Hi BELLSKIE welcome to MPS. It is a very active site and New Members are always WELCOME ! Thanks for your first POEM ! Hot firey abstract Visual and a SIZZLING POEM ! Angela & I are getting married in APRIL ~ So I can relate (in anticipation !) to verses 1 & 2. Verse 3. suggests *AMORE BURN OUT* sounds painful ! Thanks for sharing your FIRST POEM ~ MORE PLEASE !
Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
Please check our site ~ Thanks - B & A !
Thank you so much, it means a lot to me. I love how you could relate to this. Also congrats about the weeding x
Fiery indeed!
Nicely written piece!
Captures the essence of telling a story while allowing the reader the creat a self applicable visual.
Keep Writing!
Thank you so much for reading and giving me feedback 💟
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