You, from out of the blue a dream come true. Every since
your debut my life flourishes anew.
When I first caught your eye my heart became electrified
but I was acting a bit shy so you simply passed me by.
Then you turned for another look, the Earth shook,
nevertheless clueless but hooked, you remained a closed
book.
I stood intimidated for you seemed so complicated so the
conversation you initiated and I was elevated. You so
beautifully understated.
Hence, your elegance leaves me in suspense, however you're
very clever the way use commonsense.
Nonetheless I acquiesce, your beauty, your finesse, amazing
and I'm forever impressed with such faithfulness.
You... Timeless.
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A delicate piece on love. I felt I melted by the end. Such a wonderful and beautiful read
Thank you
HI MILMAN ~ BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing an elegantly penned Ode to Love ! We can empathise with this ODE. We SAW - We TALKED - We fell in LOVE - We are getting MARRIED in APRIL ! Im 36 & ANGELA is 31 and it will be our FIRST & LAST Marriage ~ AMEN. We share everything !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
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