Mil57Man

\\\"YOU\\\"

You, from out of the blue a dream come true. Every since

your debut my life flourishes anew.

 

When I first caught your eye my heart became electrified

but I was acting a bit shy so you simply passed me by.

 

Then you turned for another look, the Earth shook,

nevertheless clueless but hooked, you remained a closed

book.

 

I stood intimidated for you seemed so complicated so the

conversation you initiated and I was elevated. You so

beautifully understated.

 

Hence, your elegance leaves me in suspense, however you're

very clever the way use commonsense.

 

Nonetheless I acquiesce, your beauty, your finesse, amazing

and I'm forever impressed with such faithfulness.

 

You... Timeless.

Comments2

  • Daydream Believer

    A delicate piece on love. I felt I melted by the end. Such a wonderful and beautiful read

    Thank you

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    HI MILMAN ~ BRIAN HERE ! Thanks for sharing an elegantly penned Ode to Love ! We can empathise with this ODE. We SAW - We TALKED - We fell in LOVE - We are getting MARRIED in APRIL ! Im 36 & ANGELA is 31 and it will be our FIRST & LAST Marriage ~ AMEN. We share everything !

    Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛💛💛
    Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B !



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