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F#cked

In sickness I find myself so very much alive

As in health I find myself so very much in pain

With every movement I stay perfectly still

As I stand motionless my body jerks & shakes

 

Like a feather I plummet to the earth

Like a stone I drift towards the ground

Like a leaf I sink beneath the waves

Like a rock I rest upon the surface where…

 

…everything’s fucked up, it’s all fucked up

Everything is fucking fucked up

& it’s here that I find myself completely stuck

 

In life I find myself so very close to death

As in death I find myself so very much alive

With every heart-beat my blood fails to pump

With every breath I take I cannot breathe

 

It’s all broken, torn apart & split

Splintered, turned upside-down & ripped

Snapped in two, smashed & fractured

Cracked, crushed & finally shattered

 

Like a leaf I plunge to the ground

Like a rock I glide towards the earth

Life a feather I drop beneath the surface

Like a stone I settle upon the waves where…

 

…everything’s fucked up, it’s all fucked up

Everything is fucking fucked up

& it’s here that I find myself permanently stuck

 

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Comments12

  • dusk arising

    Well i guess we are all in that same state aren't we.... i stopped trying to reason with it or work it all out (impossible) so i just say f_ck it and let it be.

    love the authors comment directed u know where

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      Dusk,

      Totally agree with you.

      Authors note was removed by request so I decided to accept.

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    • Poetic Dan

      Hahaha, loved your notes, although join to express not to bothered with who was in it! Life is full of differences and here is definitely that!

      A wonderful darkness of a write!

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        Dan

        Glad you enjoyed the authors notes. They have been removed by request but you know them!

        Thanks mate

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      • LAWLESS

        You are pretty fucked up. Luckily you’re in the right crowd.

        Hope you shared a little love today. The D&O show made me feel warm and fuzzy.

        • LAWLESS

          The undeserving I’m sure.

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            Lawless,

            Yes I am!! Lol!

            As for the D&O show it was rather entertaining. It was a highly executed attack which must have taken ages to create. I do take my hat off to their dedication. I wonder who will be next.

            Thanks,

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          • myself and me

            You are bloody right.

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              M&M

              Sometimes I bloody am!

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            • Evergreen

              “Like a feather I plummet to the earth”. I don’t know why this line resonates within me, but it does. You have a unique and creative writing style and your talent can’t and won’t be ignored. Know that you are appreciated, as is your writing.

              - Evergreen

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                Evergreen,

                Appreciate your kind words my friend.

                Regards

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              • Goldfinch60

                That feather is fallen from the angel that is looking after you Unsub, look up at your angel and you will see the f-cking light!!

                Andy

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                  Andy,

                  I can’t see it! It’s raining like hell here in wales. I think the angel was been blown away in the f#cking wind.

                  Regards

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                • orchidee

                  Ooh, I'm gonna be very 'British' and say - It'll be OK, old chap; all will soon be spiffing again; it's just a bad-hair day; it'll pass! (heehee).
                  Fido barking like mad now! You marked it 18+, but he saw F,F, and F,....!

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                    Orchi,

                    No rude words here since I can’t spell them!!!

                    Regards

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                  • orchidee

                    Here's my next poem - your ears will burn, and Fido's!
                    Ohhh, F, F, B, F, and F
                    *(*&%*)@~!! and all that stuff
                    Yes, F, B, B, F, F and more
                    And furthermore *&^%$£({}!&*?@!
                    - Though I dare not this translate! lol.

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                      Orchi,

                      You offend me! Lol!

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                    • Maxine Smith

                      My sentiments exactly, especially your last stanza.
                      I’m with you now, what ever will be so fuck it!!
                      Spot on this my friend.
                      The world of being fucked up makes the best writing.

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                        Maxine,

                        just an observation of life these days!!

                        It's a fucked up world.

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                        • Maxine Smith

                          It certainly is.

                        • Skie Khaleesi

                          Holy shit your imagery is spot on. I enjoyed this work very much! cant wait to read more!

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                          Skie

                          Oh there’s loads more darkness waiting to see the light of day!

                          Thanks for the read & comment,,

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                        • Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33)

                          Wow..another masteepiece that hits home for me...it must be planetary or something
                          .lol...love it

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                            33,

                            Oh we are probably brothers from a previous time!

                            Regards

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