Music
of the
void.
Sounds
emanating
from the
ether.
Celestial
vibrations.
Vibrating,
uniting.
Uniting
everything,
everywhere.
All connected.
Immersed.
All immersed
in the same
waters.
Infinite ocean
of sound,
vibrations,
music.
Music
of the
cosmos.
Uniting music
vibrates
through all.
Uniting all.
Available
to all.
Available
to all who
listen.
Soothing
the beast.
Easing the
pain.
Listen!
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Author:
John Prophet (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 14th, 2020 07:40
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Comments2
I found this format/layout too difficult to read and absorb the content. There are one or two poets on here who always use this format though.
Hi DA,
Thank you kindly for reading my work.
The format is meant to focus on the individual meaning of each word, thus allowing its message to be front and center. Meaning that can be muted within sentences and paragraphs. This creates vividness otherwise hidden. The skeletal nature of my efforts also allows the reader to flesh out meaning based on the readers personal worldview. Thus no two observers are reading the exact same creation.
JP
Valid comment without doubt. Have you tried different layouts/formats in here? I ask because i wonder whether you would make your work more widely read and attract more comments (compliments usually) than you have been getting... just a suggestion ... it's always good, I find, to read a complimentary bunch of comments on a piece.... you're obviously an accomplished poet/writer and it would be good to see you getting more reads and responses on mps... just airing an opinion.
I’ve tried, never worked for me. Didn’t feel right, so I revert back to this. Honestly, not concerned about feed back. Just write for the fun of it.
I like it!
Thank you
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