Dear mom,
I'm not ok,
my feelings in
i can't portray
ibe told you once
I've told you twice
please mom, I don't want a fight.
you break me down
peice by peice
the words you say
they cut so deep.
sticks and stones may break my bones
yet you make me feel alone
mom,
im not doing ok
i feel no longer that I can stay,
on this planet for much mor longer
but I guess I'll stay another day.
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Author:
rosie haycock (
Offline) - Published: February 16th, 2020 15:20
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a quick poem I wrote on my feeling today.
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
HI ROSIE ~ Welcome to MPS it is an empathetic site. It functions by reading & commenting on each others poems ~ OK. Thanks for your first Poem ~ it is indeed sad. Especially when those who we should depend on most ~ let us down. Both Angela (my Fiancee) & I have very supportive Parents !
Your final four lines send out a warning signa|. Life is too precious to waste so our advice would be to hang in ~ you will soon (18) have your independence !
Thinking of You ~ Praying for You
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💛💛💛
Thank you ever so much for this kind message! I’m in a better place now so I don’t these thoughts as often, but I’m getting help x best regards- Rosie
I ran away from home at 14 over 24 years Later those words still run deep.
Very well expressed
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
Thank you for this comment dan 🙂
Always always stay another day ❤️
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